Somewhere out there among
several people there is the man who you
several people there is the man who you
loves you immensely, who
takes care of you who never
lets you down, who holds your hand and walks
with you, who
says you how much you mean
to him ,who joins you in joy
and wipes your tears when
you cry, who trusts you so
much and loves you more
than himself, who gives
you all his time whenever
possible and makes
you forget the world around you, who says
how beautiful you are
seeing right
in your eyes and that’s when
you feel that true
love exists
♥
Keep Smiling
- Sachin Prabhu
I know one such man. :)
ReplyDeleteI think I do too Namrata :)
DeleteSweet poem Sachin :)
@namrata i c ;) tnx for reading :)
Delete@sabeeha thanks a lot :) ^_^
DeleteNicely written buddy..:)
ReplyDeletethank you :) keep visiting ^_^
Deletenice poem .. i guess we all have one such person :)
ReplyDeleteThank you :) yea :)
DeleteBeautiful poem:-) Nicely written, Sachin. Happy to discover your blog
ReplyDeletethanks a lot eli ^_^ means lot ^_^ keep visiting :)
Deletebeautiful lines. I am sure whoever read your poem, thought of their love. Love the way you arranged the lines in a heart shape.
ReplyDeletetnq so much for dropping by n reading ^_^ :) keep visiting :)
DeleteThe poem created a love structure isn't it ?? Wow
ReplyDeleteyea i wanted to be in heart shape :D tnq for reading :) keep visiting :)
DeleteGood really Good
Deletetnq so much <3 ^_^ ^_^
DeleteThis one is brilliant :) ur best so far!!
ReplyDeleteis it ? :D thank you so much swatz :D ^_^
DeleteThis reminds me of my husband. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteaah thats a gr8 compliment :) thank you so much diiiiii ^_^
DeleteHello there!!
ReplyDeleteThat is one lovely poem, Sachin. Not just because of the beautiful portrayal of emotions but it is also remarkable how you managed to make a perfect concrete poem (a poem which uses a word and stanza pattern which forms the shape of the central idea) Kudos...looking forward to reading more :) welcome to blogsphere...following you now.
hello swarnali :) tnq so much ^_^ ur words really means lot to me ^_^ followin u too :D
DeleteExtremely sweet!! :)
ReplyDeletetnq so much simran :)
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