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Sunday, 29 June 2014

Five Sentence Fiction #1 : Feathers


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It was a dense forest and 12 year old , pooja was travelling with her father who was a forest officer believed he was the hero who protects animals of forest.

They came across many animals like rabbit ,deer along the way and little girl was so happy seeing them as she was getting an opportunity of seeing the animals from close distance in their world far from the busy life of metropolitan city.

As they moved little farther they came across a peacock dancing amidst green trees with colorful feathers spread open.

Pooja was just mesmerized watching the peacock dance with the breathtaking beautiful feathers shining under sun which made her forget all the sadness and asked if this peacocks are safe in forest.

Her father told that he made sure no bird is attacked by poachers who kill the bird for feathers and the little girl was proud of her father and just said to herself her father is real hero.

(PS:Linking this post to the Five Sentence Fiction prompt )

Keep Smiling :)
- Sachin Prabhu

20 comments:

  1. It's simple and sweet. The feeling we come across almost everyday seeing good deeds of our guardians and people around. Very nice :)

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    1. tnq so much simran ^_^ keep visiting :D

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  2. Cute... Daddy's always a hero. :)

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    1. yep ;) tnq so much for reading namrata ^_^

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  3. Wow that's a nice take on the prompt! People who poach animals are heartless. Kudos to the father for doing such a noble work of saving them.

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    1. yea they are heartless :| tnq so much for reading :) keep visiting :)

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  4. Simple and sweet :) Nice one Sachin :)

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  5. Yayy :) simple n nice :) wish i too can see peacock dancing in forsest one day ^-^ n punish those who kill these beautiful birds fr der greed -_-

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    1. tnq so much nehu :) yea punish greedy ppl -_- so is the forest officer ;)

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  6. He's setting the right example, isn't he ? By taking care of the birds, and animals and by conveying the msg to the little girl :)
    Kudos over this one, for choosing a relevant subject !

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    1. yea he is :) tnq so much di :) keep visiting :)

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  7. Sweet story. Girls just adore their dads and dad was setting a good example for his little girl. Peacocks are such majestic birds.

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  8. Great message here, Sachin.
    We want no poaching...

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    1. tnq so much :) keep visiting :) yea no poaching :)

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  9. Simple and sweet, I agree with everybody else. You conveyed the girl's emotions quite in the flow :)

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    1. tnq so much sou :) ^_^ keep visiting :)

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